Dr. Jamie Bondage

Ryan: I growled and walked back up to our room. I smiled and walked over to the bed. I stopped short. I grabbed my phone and saw several messages. I ...

Ryan: I grinned. "Sleeping off a wonderful night." I smirked. "I had a good time...I'd go into details, but that seems too cruel." I smiled with mock sweetness. I had ...

**still waiting for TN to post for Carman!!!!!** Johnathon: I frowned and tried dialing Ryan. He didn't answer. I cursed under my breath. "He probably forgot to turn his phone ...

1st one: I love the meaning behind it, but it doesn't flow! It's choppy and short. The stanzas don't exactly make sense. It needs to be longer. Add at least ...

Johnathon: "I don't know where Ryan is. I'll call him after I get there!" I hung up the phone and grabbed a cab, rushing to the hospital. I located Liz. ...

Johnthon: I growled and scanned for Ryan. "When?! How?! where are you?! Is she going to be okay?!" Ryan: I sighed. "Fine. Just breakfast." I sat down and looked at ...

Ryan: I grinned. "I'm going to go find Carolina." I noticed Carman and groaned. I sighed. I had to walk past her table to I did...passing her reluctantly. Johnathon: "Hello? ...

I really like the message behind this, and though I love the way it flows, it seems too repetitive. I think you need more verses. what's going on?! All you ...

**Awh! Poor carolina! You get to be Carman now. XD** Ryan: I glared at Grace. "Leave my friend alone." she glared, fluttered her eyelashes, and left. I smiled. "So...how are ...

Johnathon: I growled as Grace tried to kiss my neck. "STOP it! I'm serious! I donzt want you!" ryan: I looked around and saw Johnathon fighting off Grace. "Is there ...

Um...It's okay. it doesn't flow at all. It's very brief and sketchy. add more and make it longer. Try and make it flow more. who's dying? why? what happened? How's ...

**Look back earlier. Johnathon left to get breakfast and Grace was flirting with him.** Ryan: I blushed. "Thanks. sorry to barge in. I'll go look for him." I turned on ...

Ryan: I grinned at a sleepy Liz. "Is Johnathon here?" Johnathon: I glared at Grace who battered her eyelashes at me flirtatiously. "You don't need Liz." She whispered. I growled.

Ryan: I laughed. "No, rest. You need it. i'm going to go see what Johnathon's up to. i'll talk to you when you wake." I kissed her lips, dressed, and ...

Ryan: I chuckled. "I love you too. Tired?" I asked, stroking her hair.